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An aspect of better writing on LinkedIn

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The Core Insight: Escape the Curse of Knowledge

The Problem: The more expert you become, the harder it gets to connect with your audience because you forget what it feels like to be a beginner.

The Solution: Stop using abstract expert language and start speaking directly to your audience’s lived experience.

The Framework for Better LinkedIn Writing:

Instead of abstract concepts like:

  • “Alignment”
  • “Purpose”
  • “Awareness”

Write about concrete experiences:

  1. Emotions they feel daily:

    • Anger, anxiety, exhaustion
    • Frustration, self-doubt, overwhelm
  2. Specific situations they face:

    • Tense work meetings
    • Family dynamics at home
    • Quiet moments of reflection
  3. Observable behaviors:

    • Blaming others
    • Second-guessing decisions
    • Numbing out with distractions

The Writing Technique:

Use “You” to create relatable stories that paint a vivid picture of their daily reality, rather than abstract professional jargon.

Example transformation:

  • ❌ “Your lack of alignment is evident in your daily job”
  • ✅ “You’re sitting in yet another endless meeting. Your heart rate picks up every time you’re asked a question…”

The Result:

When you speak clearly about what your audience feels every day, your content transforms from vague and abstract to magnetic and relatable—attracting your dream clients.

Bottom line: Meet your audience where they are emotionally, not where you are intellectually.

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